FROM THE AUTHOR
I'd love to hear what you thought.
What stayed with you in Chapter One? What drew you in, or didn't quite work? Share a few lines below. Questions about the story are welcome too.
A note to the author
A few lines are enough.
Ideas for your feedback
You don't need to answer every question. Tell me whatever stood out.
Chapter One discussion prompts (contains spoilers)
- At what point did you want to keep reading? Did anything slow you down?
- What impression did you get of Elias and Mira?
- Could you picture Deepwater? Which details made it feel real, or left you confused?
- Did the mystery around Maren's document make sense and interest you?
- Would you want to read Chapter Two? Why or why not?
- Were there any awkward sentences, confusing speakers, or inconsistencies?
A note from the author
Where the Light Falls is an original novel I'm developing. I'm sharing its world and the opening chapter as the story takes shape. Thank you for taking an interest in it.